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#1
Posted 23 March 2013 - 11:00 AM
V3!!!
hello this my first real puplic program whit ADV. computers
hope you like it screens are comming
http://pastebin.com/0LY68H6L
or use
pastebin get 0LY68H6L install
or use
http://www.sendspace.com/file/3wjrmb (add it to the computer with that you want to have this system you need to do edit startup shell.run("boot") )
you need to run the installer
used things
Pin lock by Cranium
Tgl By Me!
Lemon Filemanager v0.9.7 by Felix
Orther things are vannilla in computercraft
If you see any bug contact me
YAY screenies
hello this my first real puplic program whit ADV. computers
hope you like it screens are comming
http://pastebin.com/0LY68H6L
or use
pastebin get 0LY68H6L install
or use
http://www.sendspace.com/file/3wjrmb (add it to the computer with that you want to have this system you need to do edit startup shell.run("boot") )
you need to run the installer
used things
Pin lock by Cranium
Tgl By Me!
Lemon Filemanager v0.9.7 by Felix
Orther things are vannilla in computercraft
If you see any bug contact me
YAY screenies
#2
Posted 23 March 2013 - 12:34 PM
Um... I only looked at the installer, and I dislike what I see.
Spelling (and grammar) errors all over the place.
Since you've stated that you're working on pictures, I'm not going to hit you for it.
For future reference, you should probably take the pictures before posting.
I did this too with the program I released, so you're not the only one.
And a side note : WHY is everyone choosing Microsoft as a model? Microsoft is evil...
Spelling (and grammar) errors all over the place.
Since you've stated that you're working on pictures, I'm not going to hit you for it.
For future reference, you should probably take the pictures before posting.
I did this too with the program I released, so you're not the only one.
And a side note : WHY is everyone choosing Microsoft as a model? Microsoft is evil...
#3
Posted 24 March 2013 - 04:56 AM
haha i see the fail i will update it and the spelling and grammatic sorry i`m dutch and 12
#4
Posted 24 March 2013 - 04:56 AM
First there are all these spelling and grammar errors, and then these bad graphics. After that, the links to the programs are broken, and you can not do really much.
But because you're new, thats (I think/hope) ok...
But because you're new, thats (I think/hope) ok...
#5
Posted 24 March 2013 - 06:23 AM
ardera, on 24 March 2013 - 04:56 AM, said:
On topic: First there are all these spelling and grammar errors, and then these bad graphics. After that, the links to the programs are broken, and you can not do really much.
But because you're new, thats (I think/hope) ok... <---
yea i`m new to cc i made older Ugly programs this is my first advanced program
i`m currently working On V2 with mor pics and better textures
#6
Posted 24 March 2013 - 06:28 AM
Please post screenshot and a .zip version. All people dont have the http enabled.
#7
Posted 24 March 2013 - 07:59 AM
K-dence, on 24 March 2013 - 06:28 AM, said:
Please post screenshot and a .zip version. All people dont have the http enabled.
http://www.sendspace.com/file/3wjrmb
try that if not work ask me
i got now screenshots
#8
Posted 25 March 2013 - 08:28 PM
Though this isn't the most amazing peice of code I have ever seen, it's a decent start. Though the term OS is overused, it's a good starting point. I made two at some point.
Good luck
Good luck
#9
Posted 29 March 2013 - 12:44 AM
i have now added my own game system and a menu Logo i know its ugly
#11
Posted 30 March 2013 - 03:11 PM
Look, not to be rude, but the way your OS is coded is really noobish, example:
while true do local event, button, X, Y = os.pullEvent("mouse_click") XY = X..","..Y if XY == "6,6" then shell.run("pastebin","get","B9xhDsrG","startup") break end if XY == "7,7" then print("Okay no probelem") shell.run("pastebin","get","V7xzYpe3","startup") break end endMost people would do that like this:
while true do local event, button, X, Y = os.pullEvent("mouse_click") XY = X..","..Y if XY == "6,6" then shell.run("pastebin","get",B9xhDsrG","startup") break end if XY == "7,7" then print("Okay no problem") -- You spelled problem wrong, it looks bad if you have spelling errors break end endThis way makes your code easier to read, and looks more professional.
#12
Posted 31 March 2013 - 11:48 AM
English is not his first language, as proven by the startup file, dutch is. To bad I don't speak dutch.
Anyway ... This is ... the worst thing I've ever seen. Some notes.
People don't like it when your boot up sleeps for no reason, Its okay to show people your logo, but don't force them to see it for 6 seconds.
One or two seconds is okay.
And what is that background ... It looks awful. It looks like you went into paint and puke on it.
I'm also surprised by the lack of effort on even making the desktop items in a grid or atleast not overlapping.
The icon names for Movie and FileManager don't even match up with their icons.
And tgl doesn't have an Icon, AND the background color for it is not blue like the rest? Whats up with that.
You also forgot to give credit for the FileManager, its obviously not yours.
That tgl game manager ... all it does is allow you to run worm which you can do from the desktop.
This is far from being an OS, or even being a good Graphical Shell. Running one of these programs is supposed to increase functionality, all this did was decrease it.
I'm not sure if this is a nooby attempt or an attempt to emulate Microsoft being bad.
Anyway ... This is ... the worst thing I've ever seen. Some notes.
People don't like it when your boot up sleeps for no reason, Its okay to show people your logo, but don't force them to see it for 6 seconds.
One or two seconds is okay.
And what is that background ... It looks awful. It looks like you went into paint and puke on it.
I'm also surprised by the lack of effort on even making the desktop items in a grid or atleast not overlapping.
The icon names for Movie and FileManager don't even match up with their icons.
And tgl doesn't have an Icon, AND the background color for it is not blue like the rest? Whats up with that.
You also forgot to give credit for the FileManager, its obviously not yours.
That tgl game manager ... all it does is allow you to run worm which you can do from the desktop.
This is far from being an OS, or even being a good Graphical Shell. Running one of these programs is supposed to increase functionality, all this did was decrease it.
I'm not sure if this is a nooby attempt or an attempt to emulate Microsoft being bad.
#13
Posted 05 April 2013 - 04:03 AM
V3 Update!
#14
Posted 06 April 2013 - 02:18 PM
It was annoying me too much with your bad English, so I cleaned up your installer, hopfuly you will clean the rest up yourself.
Spoiler
#15
Posted 08 April 2013 - 10:08 AM
It's Not Working
#16
Posted 27 May 2013 - 05:09 AM
i`m working on an brand new os like windows 8
#17
Posted 14 July 2013 - 04:44 PM
This os needs tons of work, I would recommend that the dev gets a github for this OS.
I have cleaned up the installer and did some optimizations to it as well. Enjoy! http://pastebin.com/qd8K5CsQ
I have cleaned up the installer and did some optimizations to it as well. Enjoy! http://pastebin.com/qd8K5CsQ
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