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#1 Kaleb702

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Posted 20 February 2012 - 09:03 PM

I has a website.
http://www.kapowcreations.com

CRITIQUES.

WIP level: VERY INCOMPLETE.

#2 MewK

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Posted 20 February 2012 - 09:11 PM

  • the poll doesn't fit the design
  • the headline font doesn't fir to the logo font
  • the blue navigation box looks weirds, why so much contrast? o.o
  • font size is too small
  • the stock photos look cheap
  • really nothing fits together
The website works, but looks bad. Try to use some proper and free CSS themes as refernces to improve your own. You made so many easily fixable design mistakes. The content is okay, even though the program library forum would do it as well.

Sorry for the harsh words, but if you ask for critiques, you'll get them^^

#3 Kaleb702

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Posted 20 February 2012 - 09:22 PM

1. Got that already. Was searching for a better one.
2. The logo is a placeholder.
3. I have no idea.
4. Mmkay.
5. They came with the template.
6. Once all the placeholder things that came with the template are gone, it'll fit better.


It's also mainly just a poster; no content or anything. This is due to it still being only 0.01% complete.

EDIT:
Font darkened.

#4 luza

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Posted 21 February 2012 - 12:49 PM

pleeeease, pleeeease learn html and css. It's not that hard but self-coded websites look so much better.

#5 Kaleb702

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Posted 21 February 2012 - 05:47 PM

View Postluza, on 21 February 2012 - 12:49 PM, said:

pleeeease, pleeeease learn html and css. It's not that hard but self-coded websites look so much better.

I know HTML and CSS, and this is an HTML template.
I'm simply working -from the template- so that it doesn't take -as- long.





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