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#1 NEOparmen

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Posted 14 November 2013 - 01:05 PM

RedOS
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We are introducing new operating system for ComputerCraft - RedOS.
The basic version includes: General information about the system, multiple users, file browsing, rednet messages, calculator, calendar and much more ..
Actually it doesn’t support multitasking. We plan to release many updates.
We hope that RedOS will make ComputerCraft easier for you. We welcome any feedback and evaluation.

Screenshots
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Download
pastebin get 0iFqHK3a RedOS

Changelog
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Help us with translation
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Credits
NEOparmen - Code
Rejsr - Translation, testing
MiCLeCZ - Testing

Edited by NEOparmen, 10 April 2014 - 07:56 PM.


#2 LBPHacker

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Posted 14 November 2013 - 01:43 PM

  • It's HTTP (hyper-text transfer protocol? IIRC), not HTPP... (screenshot #1)
  • The logo should look like attachment #1

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Edited by LBPHacker, 14 November 2013 - 01:45 PM.


#3 NEOparmen

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Posted 14 November 2013 - 02:39 PM

Fixed in 1.0.1, thanks

#4 DarkenedEvil

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Posted 14 November 2013 - 02:53 PM

After a quick glance it looks graphically nice but textually and code wise it lacks a bit.

What I like/you did well on:
I really like the logo.
A way to block a certain name is a good idea.

What could be improved/bugs
The cursor position in the user registration page is not in the correct place.
No way to get back to startup after going into login.
When trying to run a program it just shuts down after doing anything(clicking or hitting a character on the keyboard.)

After looking at your code I noticed that there was no indentation. Also I noticed that you have broken your OS down to a ton of different programs. Which if thats what you like then go ahead but I just think its harder to work with when there are a bunch of programs.

Well thats my input. Overall nice job, although there are some grammar errors and spelling errors I can still get around.

#5 TheOddByte

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Posted 14 November 2013 - 03:06 PM

As DarkenedEvil I also detected some grammar and spelling errors, Those were in the translation spoiler, Also.. Are you putting those translations in different files or what? If not it would be wise to put them in a table like this or something
Spoiler

Aside from that it looks pretty nice ;) ( even though I haven't tested it )

#6 TNTeener

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Posted 23 November 2013 - 02:41 PM

Hey! I can translate to Polish language

#7 Neekow

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Posted 23 November 2013 - 04:33 PM

before i continue, got a question ... as french's sentences are usualy longer than english's one ... does it fit? :

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lang = " Francais"
error1 = " Erreur: l'utilisateur existe deja!"
error2 = " Erreur: Cet utilisateur est bloque!"
error3 = " Erreur: Mot de passe incorrect!"
error4 = " Erreur: Utilisateur non trouve!"
error5 = " Erreur: Fichier introuvable"
error6 = " Erreur: Le nouveau mot de passe ne corresponds pas!"
error7 = " Erreur: L'ancien mot de passe ne corresponds pas!"
error8 = " Erreur: Vous ne pouvez pas changer votre propre niveau!"
error9 = " Erreur: Niveau trop grand!"
error10 = " Erreur: Impossible de se connecter pour charger la page!"
error11 = " Erreur: Impossible de mettre a jour RedOS"
error12 = " Erreur: Entrez les noms des documents!"
error13 = " Erreur: Syntaxe!"
error14 = " Erreur: Mauvais format!"
error15 = " Erreur: Modem introuvable!"

If not, i'll have to DL your OS to find the rights words for everything

#8 NEOparmen

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Posted 23 November 2013 - 05:53 PM

View PostTNTeener, on 23 November 2013 - 02:41 PM, said:

Hey! I can translate to Polish language
That would be great

View PostNeekow, on 23 November 2013 - 04:33 PM, said:

before i continue, got a question ... as french's sentences are usualy longer than english's one ... does it fit? :

Quote

lang = " Francais"
error1 = " Erreur: l'utilisateur existe deja!"
error2 = " Erreur: Cet utilisateur est bloque!"
error3 = " Erreur: Mot de passe incorrect!"
error4 = " Erreur: Utilisateur non trouve!"
error5 = " Erreur: Fichier introuvable"
error6 = " Erreur: Le nouveau mot de passe ne corresponds pas!"
error7 = " Erreur: L'ancien mot de passe ne corresponds pas!"
error8 = " Erreur: Vous ne pouvez pas changer votre propre niveau!"
error9 = " Erreur: Niveau trop grand!"
error10 = " Erreur: Impossible de se connecter pour charger la page!"
error11 = " Erreur: Impossible de mettre a jour RedOS"
error12 = " Erreur: Entrez les noms des documents!"
error13 = " Erreur: Syntaxe!"
error14 = " Erreur: Mauvais format!"
error15 = " Erreur: Modem introuvable!"

If not, i'll have to DL your OS to find the rights words for everything
Yes, it fit, RedOS uses length of string

#9 Neekow

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Posted 23 November 2013 - 06:14 PM

Ok, so i'm on translate ;)

#10 NEOparmen

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Posted 06 December 2013 - 01:38 PM

Today was released version 1.1.0

Changelog:
Added mouse support
Added Polish translation
Changed login menu
Bug fixes

Edited by NEOparmen, 06 December 2013 - 01:39 PM.


#11 namp007

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Posted 08 December 2013 - 11:20 AM

I'll hook you up with a dutch translation ;)

#12 Goof

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Posted 08 December 2013 - 02:01 PM

Danish translation on the way... ;)

#13 nutcase84

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Posted 08 December 2013 - 07:19 PM

I like your logo, looks good. :D

#14 NEOparmen

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Posted 09 December 2013 - 10:45 AM

Thanks :)

#15 NEOparmen

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Posted 21 December 2013 - 07:53 AM

Released new version 1.2.1
Added Shell
Fixed spelling mistakes

#16 ame824

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Posted 22 December 2013 - 06:04 PM

german translate is ready ;)

http://pastebin.com/GL1pZwN2

I
can't write PM ^^

in the Language change menu

german -> " [3] Deutsch "

I wish you a merry christmas!
And a happy new year =D

#17 wieselkatze

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Posted 23 December 2013 - 02:15 PM

Looks quite nice, but I found a few bugs.
In the Login-Screen you can write beyond the box and if you set your password to "" (to a len of 0) you can't even login ^^
If you would like to, you can use my "little" adv-read function.
http://pastebin.com/1fTPHsnN
Looking forward to see more! ;)

#18 SnappComputerCraft

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Posted 29 December 2013 - 12:28 AM

There is neither a way to use floppy disks, nor a way to make documents.

I like the logo, though!

#19 NEOparmen

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Posted 01 February 2014 - 07:56 AM

Working on version 1.3, which is going to support Glasses. Some pics:

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#20 wieselkatze

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Posted 04 February 2014 - 05:46 AM

Looks neat :)
Also I saw that you fixed the user "".
Btw when installing you can't select color lightBlue.
Also after that the title says "Select your launguage", so just a typo.
Also some other bugs, but I'll wait till the update and see if they are already fixed ;)





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